This week I have been practising using capital letters and full stops. I have made a book using google slides to write and illustrate my story. Please have a look and leave me a comment about my writing.
Thursday, 27 September 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Takira,
ReplyDeleteI love your story - it's very well illustrated and uses some great backgrounds. It looks like you ran out of time to finish off your beautiful pictures on the last few pages, so perhaps next time you can edit it and finish it off :) Ka pai!
From Miss W
Hi Takira, I love your story it's amazing!! I love how you designed your characters it's amazing.You did great designs for the mermaids AMAZING! Thanks Gracie
ReplyDeleteKa pai Takira this piece of writing is Amazing and your backgrounds are super cool
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