106A Carmen Road
Hei Hei
Christchurch 8042
Dear Mega air,
My family visited Mega Air in the school holidays on October the 11th. We came to celebrate my little brother’s 3rd birthday. We had a good time, The trampolines are really bouncy and fun for everyone. It's nice that you are helping everyone getting out trampolines that are really hard to get out. it's fun you are helping everyone do exercise. The best is the balls going in the basket hoop. It is good you show everyone the safety videos first. It looks like everyone wants to come every day, in fact, that is true! Though there are a few problems, one problem is that you have to tell us when to go home, please can we stay longer. Maybe to make it better you can make the walls colorful so everyone could see their favourite colors. mega air is great because everyone is listening to the rules. why can’t you make a tramp with a pool so when we jump up into the pool from the tramp. Why did you put a wall in the middle of the ball thing is it because someone will cheat and throw balls at the other team. In one of the tramps are a ball game but why is there a man with a whistle up on a ladder is it because he is making sure we do it right. I hope to see you again
Love from takira
Hey Takira,
ReplyDeleteJulia here from Rimu. This is a very good post but maybe next time if you present in in a way and it pops out maybe people are more likely to read it. Other than that awesome post.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Hi Takira its Ian from Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you set out your sentences. In my school holidays I got some gifts from my dad and step mum. Is there any other activities you guys did ? Maybe next time you could add a cipatal M for Mega air. Kind regards Ian.